Room on the Broom

by | Oct 12, 2023 | books

Suggested Grade and Interest Level: Pre through 1

Topics to Explore: Friendships; Holidays: Halloween; Kindness and empathy

Target Skills: Vocabulary; Multiple meaning words, Attributes, Prepositions; Grammar and syntax: Past tense structures; Language literacy: Predicting events; Sequencing events; Cause-and-effect relationships; Drawing inferences; Verbal Expression; Discussion

Summary: A kindly witch who has a bit of trouble holding on to her belongings when flying on her broomstick encounters a series of events, sending a good message through her actions. To all those inquisitive creatures that have fetched her lost belongings and want a ride on her broom (and who wouldn’t?) she cries, “Yes!” and welcomes them on. She makes “room” – or space – for sharing her broom with characters of all sorts and sizes. Oops! The broom snaps in two. Her friends tumble off and the next thing you know, the witch flies straight into a big ol’ dragon midair. The dragon wants a delicious witch to go with its French fries. But where are her friends? Will they rescue her? Of course they do, and very cleverly at that. The rhyming verse tells a complete narrative, a delightful one that can be read time and again.

Book Talk:

Before the read-aloud, introduce the book by showing the cover. Read the title, pointing to the direction in which the words are read. Point out the activity going on and the items shown in the illustration. Talk about the characters on the broom (the witch and her cat). Describe the witch.

     What is she holding?
What kind of witch does she look like?
Why do you think so?

Then ask what it means to make room for something or someone. Give an example that is relevant. For example, can you make room for one more at your dinner table? Can you make room for a new classmate to join a game that you play outside? Help children begin some thoughts about the concept of making room. Does it appear that there is room – or space – on the witch’s broom for something else?

During the read-aloud, it is better to accentuate the rhythm and flow of the words as they are said all together on the line of text rather than enunciating each word separately. Try to tap out the consistent beat of the rhythm of the verse so it stays in your memory. The rhythm of verses goes like this:

da-DUM, da-da-DUM, da-da-DUM, da-da-DUM;
da-DUM, da-da-DUM, da-da-DUM, da-da-DUM.

The text is full of prepositions on nearly every page, as in

Braid down her back
Sat on their broomstick
Flew through the wind
 Out of the bushes
In his jaws
Over the fields

Into a cloud
The dragon drew back
Spread out his wings

To emphasize the prepositions, you can use your hand to accompany the text as part of your storytelling technique, pointing out the direction of the action taking place. Motions such as these can be very effective when reading rhythmic text.

To work on past tense structures, consider that it is often easier to repeat the last line of rhyming verse than to recall earlier words of the text. These are the immediately memorable words, and the rhyming aspect helps with this. Pause at the end of the page and ask the child to repeat the last line of the text, i.e., (reading aloud):

But how the witch wailed

and how the cat spat

When the wind blew so wildly

it blew off the hat.

Ask, “What did the wind do?” for a response that repeats (or nearly so) the lines of the text, i.e., “It blew off her hat.”

If the child is unable to repeat the entire words of the text, scaffold with as much help as needed, such as, “It blew off her ____.”

This modeling technique can be used to set up the next response when you ask the next question, and the child responds using a past tense construction.

Note: Pausing for Book Talk at the end of the page creates less story interruption, too!

To increase verbal expression, you may also find opportunities to pause at the end of a page and ask the child about what just happened in the story. For example, when the green bird asks, “Is there room on the broom for a bird like me?” and the witch says, “Yes!”,  finish reading to the end of the page. Then point to the picture of the bird flying toward the witch with a bow in its beak and ask, “What just happened here?”

Help the child express in words that the bird found the witch’s bow and was returning it. Scaffold with needed words to let the child fill in the rest. This also allows children to use newly learned vocabulary.

You can also use this method to help the child express the action taking place in the story. Fill in with nouns and verbs if necessary. You may start off saying something like, “The green bird has the witch’s bow in its mouth and _____.”

Point out the other animals in the page before turning to the next page.

After the read aloud, pause to consider the kind of witch the main character is. You and the child can name attributes that describe her. If naming attributes is still a little difficult for the child to initiate independently, give two choices to select from. For example, was the witch

  • Kind or mean?
  • Friendly or unfriendly?
  • Grateful or unpleasant?
  • Happy or sad?
  • Fun or serious?
  • Caring or selfish?

As the child names the witch’s attributes with you, use the word in a sentence to connect the word with the witch. You can even expand the sentence that demonstrates in what way the witch was fun, or kind, and so forth. For example, “The witch was kind when she let the frog get on for a ride,” or “The witch was fun because she let all kinds of creatures on her broom.”

To teach a child to sequence events in the order of occurrence, go back over the pages and review how there came to be so many friends on the witch’s broom that it broke in two. For example, looking back through the pictures you can see that, “First, she lost her hat and the dog that found it got on the broom. Then she lost her bow. The bird that found it asked to get on. You might ask, “And then what happened?” Then she lost her wand. What happened? The frog that found it asked to get on the broom, and so forth.

To work on cause-and-effect relationships, go back through the illustrations and ask questions to enable the expression of meaningful connections in the story. For example, when the witch loses her hat, ask

What caused the witch to lose her hat?

What caused the witch to drop her wand?

Shape responses that express the relationship in a complete sentence, connecting the essential parts, as in

  • The witch lost her hat because ______ (the wind blew it away).
  • The witch dropped her wand because _________ (she wanted to hold on to her bow); or (she clutched her bow so it didn’t fall off), and so on.

To work on drawing inferences from the stated text, ask questions that require telling about the additional steps often omitted from the text story. For example, you might say

  • The story says a horrible beast rose up from the ditch. How was it that the beast had four heads? (A: The cat, dog, bird, and frog merged together to look like one big beast.)
  • Is that really one beast? What do you think the cat, dog, bird and frog did when they fell off the broom and saw the witch with the dragon? (A: They got together and came up with a plan; they decided that they could make it look like they were one big beast.)
  • How did the witch get down to the ground when she was in the air? Why did the broom land on the ground when the witch said, “Down!”? (A: It was a magic broomstick).
  • How do you think they came up with that plan? (A: They might have all fallen into a ditch and got muddy. Maybe they hardly recognized each other. Maybe they all talked about the best way to scare the dragon away. )

Hold a discussion on the story’s meaning and how it can apply to the child’s own life situations. Ask about why it was kind of the animals to return the witch’s belongings. What is the outcome? How do others feel when we help them out?

Ask the child if he or she might have wanted a ride on the witch’s broom. Would you have asked if you were the dog, green bird, or frog? Why would you have asked?

  • Why was it kind of the witch to say yes?
  • What did she have to do because of this? (i.e., make room on the broom.)
  • Why is it a good thing to include your friends in your fun activities?
  • How does it make others feel?
  • How does it make you feel?

For work on speech articulation, use the words of the text to practice phoneme placement techniques and in target structures at the child’s acquired level. There are lots of opportunities for practice production with all kinds of phonemes, especially words with phonemes B, C, and F.

B words: back, bow, bowl, beak, bent, bird, beyond, bog, bounded, be, but, begin, beast, buzz, and bone

B-Blends: braid, black, blew, broom, broomstick, and breathing

C: cat, back, black, croak, keen, can, beak, cloak, can, clean, cloud, speak, shriek, shake, and squelched

F: Forests, for, four, found, fields, fold, fell, feather(ed), fur(red), feast, and fill(ed)

F-Blends: flew, fly, from, flapped, frog, French fries, fluttered, and frightful

Note: See lots of additional methods and techniques for The Gruffalo by the same author listed in the Pre-K Catalog of Books Are for Talking, Too! (Fourth Edition).

Additional Note: See other books on the themes of Halloween, Seasons, (Autumn), Friendships and more in the Topic Exploration Index of Books Are for Talking, Too! (Fourth Edition).