Journey

by | Jul 12, 2023 | books

by Aaron Becker
Somerville, Mass: Candlewick Press, 2013

Suggested Interest Level: Pre-K through 5

Topics to Explore: Creativity; Fantasy; Journeys

Skills to Target: Vocabulary; Grammar and syntax; Literate discourse (including Sequencing events, Causal relationships, Storytelling, Point of view, and Discussion)

Summary: A wordless picture book begins with a familiar predicament for most children. A girl finds herself at home, feeling bored. She tries to engage her mother, father, and older sibling, but they are too engrossed in their own activities to make time for her. Alone in her room, she draws on her imagination to solve her problem. Watch what unfolds as she takes her red marker and creates a door on the wall, inventing a passage. As her imagination takes flight, she passes the threshold of her door and embarks on a fantastic journey.

What is it about castles, boats, and flying creatures that intrigues us ? The artistry captivates with scenes from ancient cultures, influenced by the artist’s travels. Viewers are mesmerized, then relieved as her journey brings her back home and she finds her friend on the sidewalk. Together they create inventive ways to take off on a new adventure,  joined by the strange bird-creature that protected her on her last journey. Where could they go next?  A Caldecott Honor Book.

Book Talk

Before the book sharing, explore the cover and ask children to make predictions about what the story will be about. Engage children at their developmental level, as it is a story for a wide age range. Ask children what is unique about the castle. Identify some of its fantastic features, such as a moat, dome, tower, turret, minaret, flags, rampart, fortress, weathervane, and ornament. Reflect on the girl in the red boat and ask how she might feel on seeing this amazing site. Prompt with words such as awe, awestruck, wonder, surprise, and disbelief, to name a few. Prepare children for the adventure of telling the story through  pictures and explain that there may be many ways to interpret them.

You might also begin by taking the perspective of the girl in the boat. Ask your audience to put themselves in her place. How might you feel if you entered such a place? Have you ever been somewhere that was amazing, so much so that you were in awe?

Another way to initiate the story is by talking about the word journey. What is it?  What is another word for journey? Is there only one kind of journey? Can the word be used describe travel in the physical sense, from one place to another, and in a metaphorical sense, as in one’s experiences through a passage of time? Give an example of each.

During the book sharing, consider beginning each page with your own descriptions of scenes so that children don’t feel put on the spot. As they quietly connect with the story, perhaps they have more to add that you might have left out.

Delve further into the story by asking what the girl might be thinking and feeling. For example, once she is on the other side of her red door, see her in a magical forest at night, where lanterns in treetops highlight a stream wending its way to something in the distance. Ask what it could be. (E.g., “How do you think she’s feeling and what might she be thinking in this magical forest?’)

Turn the page to discover that the girl has wandered through the forest and reached the spot in the distance, a dock extending into the water. See her at the end of the dock, head bent down. She looks into the water, holding her red marker. You might ask, “What do you think she wants to do now?” Or “What would you do if you were the character in the story?”

On the opposite page, see the girl with her red marker reach into the water, draw a boat, and climb in. The illustrations are ideal for a child to explain the sequence of events.

Once the rhythm of shared book talk is established, follow up on the child’s response by extending it with a descriptive or a connective word. Create dialog for the story. Even though the girl is alone, she can talk out loud to herself, exclaim how she is feeling, what she is thinking and planning to do. In this way, you are connecting the story elements. You can interpret the characters’ actions in different ways. Bringing characters to life with dialogue is especially good for developing perspective-taking.

A word about book talk: Remember that your talking can be an example. Children can learn when you answer your own questions and show ways to put thoughts into words, called modeling. When children join in, use scaffolding  to build on their utterances. Add more detail and draw connections to the story using their words plus yours. Once they are engaged and participating, hand the storytelling over to the children. Add your comments to their interpretations. Transcribe their story and read it back to them while they show the illustrations and perhaps add to the story even more.

After the book sharing, ask children to tell their favorite part of the story and turn to the page of their descriptions. Help children sequence story parts by scaffolding with words like and then, and finally, or at last. Encourage the expression of causal relationships by describing events that caused other events to happen, scaffolding with words such as because, since, and so that.

For example, see the girl travel around the ancient fortress in her boat, along the waterway high overhead. Oops! The aqueduct abruptly ends. Just as she is about to go over the precipice into the cascading water, we see her solution on the opposite page. She separates from her boat, midair, and tumbles through the sky. Children can describe the sequence of actions as shown. What could she be drawing in the sky with her red marker? What is the shape? Make  predictions and see on the next page that she has drawn a magic balloon that carries her safely over the city. Scaffold their descriptions with connective words, as in, “She drew a red balloon [because she got tossed out of her boat] [since she was about to crash] [so that she could continue on her journey].”

Another way to sequence story parts is to recall the vehicles the girl used on her journey. First, she rode in a boat, then in a hot air balloon, and then on a magic carpet. Expand the sequence with a prepositional phrase using words that are relational to one another (e.g.,  “Then she rode [through the sky] on a magic carpet [over a desert] [above the domes and minarets of ancient cities].”).

To focus on storytelling, explain that stories have a logical order of elements, or a system, for how they are told. They begin with a  setting, (e.g., time and place), characters, and something that starts the story. Was there a problem? How did the [girl] respond?  What plan did [she] devise? Were there obstacles along the way? Was the goal accomplished? How was this done? How did [her] problem get resolved?  And,  importantly, what was the outcome? How did [she] feel at the end of the story?

At first, you can provide scaffolding in the form of story “grammar” questions. After telling several stories in this way, the structure will be easier to recall through their connections, and children will begin to tell cohesive stories on their own.

This is a book that can be used over and over again. With so many layers of meaning, each time you pick it up there will be something new to see, describe, and connect with to make book talk .

Special Note: Find other great wordless picture books in the catalogs of Books Are for Talking, Too! (4th Ed.). You’ll learn ways to use them for developing many more communication skills important for literate discourse.

Also: See more books covering the topics of Journeys, Creativity, and Cultures listed in the Topic Explorations index of Books Are for Talking, Too! (4th Ed.).